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《光明日报》1999年9月6日第十二版以整版篇幅刊登了一则广告,内容是庆贺南京师范大学仙林新校区一期工程竣工。广告标题以对联形式出现,广告的正文包括南京师范大学仙林校区简介和祝贺单位名单两部分。然而,无论是标题还是正文,我认为都存在着语病。一、标题部分有两处语病:1、横联“热烈祝贺南京师范大学仙林校区一期工程落成”中,“工程”与“落成”搭配不当。
The Guangming Daily published the 12th edition of September 6, 1999 with an entire page of advertisements to celebrate the completion of the first phase of Xianlin New Campus of Nanjing Normal University. Advertising title appears in the form of a couplet, the body of the advertisement includes introduction and congratulation list of Xianlin Campus of Nanjing Normal University in two parts. However, no matter whether the title or the text, I think there is a language disease. First, the title part of the two language disease: 1, cross “ Warm congratulations to Nanjing Normal University Xianlin Campus a project completed ”, “project ” and “completed ” with improper.