动作的描写表达需要准确地切合年龄,切合身份,切合情境。字斟句酌方显文字功力。唐宋八大家之一的王安石乘船路过瓜洲,船靠码头做短暂停留。他站在船头上,极目西望,但见青山隐隐,江水滔滔,春风绿野,皓月当空。触景生情,更怀念起金陵钟山的亲人。他走进船舱,拿出纸笔,略一思索,就写了一首《泊船瓜洲》:“京口瓜洲一水间,钟山只隔数重山。春风又到江南岸,明月何时照我还。” The description of the action need to accurately meet the age, in line with the identity, in line with the situation. Words deliberately discretion were text skills. Wang Anshi, one of the Tang and Song dynasties, took a short boat trip by boat to Guazhou. He stood on the bow, looking ahead, but see the green hills faint, the river surging, spring green, Haoyue blue sky. Touch King’s love, but also miss the relatives of Jinling Zhongshan. He walked into the cabin, took out a piece of paper pen, a little thought, wrote a “Boating melon Island”: “Beijing mouth melon Island water, only a few mountains Chung Shan. When I still return. ”