点评:作者选取学习生活中让自己内心震撼的一件事,详略得当地进行叙写,最为可贵的是把内心的真实感情传达出来。(指导老师:汤丽辉)你是否想过自己傲立在群山之巅,并霸气地俯瞰大地,大声喊:“仰望吧,蝼蚁,苍穹的世界你不懂,你们只配颤抖!”我便曾想过,那种呼 Comments: The author chooses one thing that makes oneself inner shock in the study life, the detail is appropriately narrated, the most precious is to convey the true inner feelings. (Instructor: Tang Lihui) Have you ever thought of standing proudly on top of the mountains and overlooking the earth in a domineering manner, shouting: “Look up, ants, the world of the sky you do not know, you only shiver!” Have thought about that kind of call