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近期,我们举行了一次三年级作文调研——写自己喜欢的一种花。要从“颜色”“样子”两方面写出花的特点,表达自己的喜爱之情。读着孩子们的作文,不禁联想起清代著名诗人袁枚的诗:“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。”赞颂的是小小的青苔花,在阳光照不到的地方尽情地绽放,显现出旺盛的生命力。调研200名学生,35.3%的学生能够仔细观察自己喜欢的一种化,并写出结构谨严、感受真切、语言流畅的佳作。41.2%的学生能从“颜色”和“样子”两个
Recently, we held a third-year essay research - write your favorite flower. From the “color ” “look ” write the characteristics of flowers from two aspects, to express their love. Reading the children’s composition, can not help but think of the famous poet Yuan Mei of the Qing Dynasty poem: “moss flowers such as rice is small, but also learn peony. ” Praise is the little moss flowers, in the sun can not enjoy the place Blooming, showing a strong vitality. Investigate 200 students, 35.3% of students can carefully observe their favorite kind, and write a cautious structure, feel real, language fluent masterpiece. 41.2% of students can learn from both “color” and “look”