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句式的运用折射出作者思维的深浅。若在考场作文中巧用比较整齐的语段或句式,就会令阅卷者眼晴为之一亮。比如排比句式,给人的感觉是有气势,有内容,可以看出作者的思维很有层次。若将整齐句式用在文章开篇,定会异峰突起,一扫一般文章开头的平淡和刻板。如考场佳作《选择牢笼》一文起句: “如果你选择的是翅膀,将拥抱整个蓝天。如果你选择的是鳍,你将亲吻茫茫碧海。
The use of sentence patterns reflects the depth of the author’s thinking. If the use of relatively neat segments or sentence patterns in the examination essay, it will make the reader’s eyes look bright. For example, the comparison of sentence patterns gives the impression that there is momentum, content, it can be seen that the author’s thinking is very hierarchical. If the neat sentence pattern is used in the opening of the article, it will surely rise to a different peak and sweep away the dullness and stereotype at the beginning of the general article. For example, if you choose wings, you will embrace the entire blue sky. If you choose fins, you will kiss the blue sea.