如果说记叙是筋骨,那么,描写就是血肉。不少学生在写记叙文时,只知道记流水账,干巴巴的几条筋骨,让人看后索然无味。那么,如何让你的文章血肉饱满呢?笔者想从“层次”“感受”“神韵”与“风貌”四个角度来谈谈。一、层次:即写景要多角度,多视点,文章才有立体感,才丰富。可采用移步换景法,从远近、高低、左右、南北等空间角度来写。例1:我看见池塘里的荷花正开 If the narrative is a bones, then, description is flesh and blood. Quite a few students write narratives, only know that the current account, a few dry bones, people look dull. So, how to make your article full of fleshy? I want to talk about from the four perspectives: “level ” “feeling ” “charm ” and “style ”. First, the level: that is to write the scene to multi-angle, multi-point of view, the article only three-dimensional sense, it is rich. Can be used step by step King of the law, from near and far, high and low, left and right, north and south and other space to write. Example 1: I see the lotus in the pond is opening