在写人记事类的习作训练中,学生不要写得太实,见人而不见神,集中有余而光彩不足;不要追求全面,浮华臃肿而亮点不亮。如何使这类文章出彩呢?关键是如何使人物形象更鲜活,如何使平凡的事也感人。本文试着结合三则实例,给予一定的启迪。一、引进具有地域特色的自然景象,创设背景。以景托人,强化形象 In the writing exercises for writing people’s memoirs, students should not write too hard. When they see people but not see God, they have more than enough concentration and lack of brilliance. They should not pursue comprehensiveness, and they should be bloated and bright. How to make such articles colorful? The key is how to make the characters more vivid, and how to make ordinary things also moving. This article tries to combine three examples to give some inspiration. First, introduce natural scenes with regional features and create backgrounds. To enhance people’s image with Jingtuo