景物描写是叙述性作文的重要组成部分,但就现在初中学生作文中的景物描写来看,有些根本没有明确的目的,没有考虑在文中写景有何作用,而是想到哪里写到哪里,随心所欲,漫无目标,那么怎样才能使写景文字充分发挥它的作用呢?一、目的要明确写景或交待文章背景,推动情节发展,或映衬人物性格,抒发主观感受。总之,要有明确的目的性,绝不能随心所欲,漫无目的,王愿坚《七根火柴》开头便写雨,“明明是月朗星稀的好天气,忽然,一阵冷风吹来,浓云像从平地上冒出来似的,霎时把天遮得严严的,接着,暴雨夹杂着栗子般的冰雹,不分点的倾泻下来。” Scenery description is an important part of narrative writing. However, in terms of scene descriptions in junior high school students’ compositions, some have no clear purpose at all. They do not consider the role of writing scenes in the text, but think of where to write and do whatever they want. With no goal, how can we make the written text fully play its role? First, the purpose is to clearly write or write the background of the article, to promote the development of the plot, or silhouetted against the character, express subjective feelings. In short, with a clear purpose, it must not be arbitrary and aimless. Wang Yuanjian wrote “Seven Matches” at the beginning to write rain, “It is obviously a good weather for the moon and stars, and suddenly, a cold wind blows, and a thick cloud looks like. When it came out of the ground, the sky was severely covered, and then the heavy rain was mixed with chestnut-like hail and it poured down without any point.”