学生的作文往往是粗枝大叶,教师在批改时用得最多的话想必就是“写得不够具体,不够生动”。农村孩子的生活空间大,有取之不竭的素材,可表达起来却是平铺直叙,笼统概括。学生的作文要想写得具体、生动,应该持之以恒地努力,一如既往地热爱生活,热爱阅读。期盼学生能在写作中快乐、健康地成长。 Students’ essay is often cumbersome, teachers use the most when rewriting the words must be “not written enough specific, not vivid ”. Rural children’s living space, there is inexhaustible material, can be expressed but it is straightforward, general summary. Students’ writing should be written in a concrete and vivid way. They should persevere in their efforts to love life and love reading as always. We hope that students can grow happily and healthily in writing.