初中语文第六册第七单元作文指导湖南／潘新华一初中生作文的修改，重点应放在词语的选择和搭配、句式的选择和使用、词语的顺序、名子的顺序等方面，且要求达到语句通顺、表达准确。修改病句，首先要寻找病因。怎样寻找病因呢？其方法有二：１先查“主干”，后查“枝叶... The composition of the seventh unit of the sixth volume of the junior middle school Chinese language guides the revision of the composition of junior high school students in Hunan and Pan Xinhua. The focus should be on the selection and collocation of words, the selection and use of sentence patterns, the order of words, the order of names, and so on. Requires smooth sentences and accurate expression. To revise a disease sentence, we must first look for the cause. How to find the cause? There are two ways to do this: 1. Check the “trunk” first, then check the "branches...