不同版本的教材,都会安排一些写人类的习作训练,但批阅学生习作时往往会发现:写出来的人要么不明不白,似乎张三李四都有点搭;要么不痛不痒,缺乏具体细致的神态、动作、语言、心理描写,这事例按在谁身上都可以。那怎样修改才能使笔下的人物棱角分明、鲜活有个性呢?第一招:将人物设于“漫画”中——凸显外貌特点写人记事的文章,少不了对人物外貌的描写,看似非重点,却也是不可忽视的难点。许 Different versions of the textbook, will be arranged to write a number of human training exercises, but when reviewing the students work often will find: written or unclear, it seems that Zhang Sandra Lee are a bit take; either insipid, lack of specific and meticulous demeanor, Action, language, psychological description, according to whom this example can be. How to modify the characters in the pen can be angular, fresh and personality? The first one: the characters set in the “comic” - to highlight the appearance of the characteristics of writers memoir articles, ultimately, the description of the appearance of the characters, look Seems non-focus, but it is also difficult to ignore. Xu