算来,我评论过的作品也实在不少了。对小女书雯的稚作,平素在家也偶尔说说,但这么正儿八经地来评说一番,却是头一回。 当孩子将《中山陵游记》最后拿给我看时,我笑着对她说:“你算是终于完成了。”说“终于完成”,这是有两个原因的:一是这篇作文的写作时间拖得很长,前后间隔了有半年多;二是孩子写得还挺苦,先先后后改了好几稿。 Finally, I commented on the work is also quite a lot. The young girl Shuwen childlike, usually at home also occasionally talk about, but so are children to comment on something, but it is the first time. When the children showed me the final “Sun Yat-sen Travels”, I said with a smile to her: “You are finally done.” Saying “finally done” is due to two reasons: First, the essay's Writing time dragged very long, before and after the interval of more than six months; the second is the child wrote quite hard, first and then changed several draft.