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【考场例文9】从不同的途径去感知自然、亲近自然□广东考生【点评:标题基本直接截取材料中的关键词句组合,进而表述为观点,值得肯定并提倡,但“亲近”一词并非来自材料,考场作文还是稳妥为好,随意增加或偷换概念,有一定风险。】作为大自然中的一员,我们都希望自己能感知自然、亲近自然。因为唯有这样,我们才能够在感知与亲近的过程中去体会到大自然的美。因此,我们应该从不同的途径去感知自然、亲近自然。【点评:开篇由“感知自然、亲近自然”引入,入题
【Exam Room 9】 From Different Ways to Perceive Nature and Close to Nature □ Candidates in Guangdong 【Comments: The title basically directly intercepts the combination of key words in the material, which is then expressed as a viewpoint which deserves recognition and promotion. However, the word “near” Is not from the material, the essay is still safe for the examination room, arbitrarily increase or steal the concept of change, there is a certain risk. As a member of nature, we all want to be able to perceive nature and be close to nature. Because only in this way can we experience the beauty of nature in the process of perception and closeness. Therefore, we should perceive nature and be close to nature in different ways. 【Comments: The beginning of the “natural perception, close to nature ” into, into the question