写人时,很多同学常用一些概括性的词句来代替具体的描述,如“他学习很用功”、“她很漂亮”等,可对到底怎样用功、长得如何漂亮却只字未提,这样显然无法让人印象深刻。怎样让你笔下的人物生动起来呢?一、看他(她)怎么“做”看人看行动。只有把人物在特定事情中的动作细致地描写出来,笔下的人物才能惟妙惟肖。如《装满昆虫的衣袋》中的一段:他边叫边用小手拍过去,敏捷地 When writing, many students often use some general terms to replace the specific description, such as “he is studying hard ”, “she is very beautiful ” and so on, in the end how hard, how beautiful but only words This is obviously not impressive. How to make your character vivid up? First, see how he (she) “do ” look at people to see action. Only the characters in a particular matter in the action described in detail, the characters can be vividly written. Such as “Insect-filled pocket” in a paragraph: He called side edge with a small hand, agile