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同学们,你喜欢参观吗?你曾经参观过哪些地方,哪些展览?你对哪一次参观最感兴趣,哪一个景点给你留下的印象最深?比如,科学实验基地,新建的大型公共设施,某地的名胜古迹、革命纪念馆、科技馆、博物馆。你会在日记中记下参观的过程和感受吗?下面这则日记讲了一个小朋友的参观过程,可能会引起你的共鸣。请你再读读老师的评点,希望你从中受到启发,写一篇自己的参观记,好吗?
Students, do you like to visit? Where have you visited and which exhibitions have you visited? What is the most interesting place for you to visit? Which one of the spots gives you the deepest impression? For example, the scientific experiment base, the large new public facilities, A place of historical sites, Revolutionary Memorial Hall, Science and Technology Museum, Museum. Will you write down the process and feelings of visiting in your diary? The following diary tells the story of a child's visit and may resonate with you. Please read the teacher's comments again, I hope you will be inspired to write a note of his visit, okay?