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继去年《失学少年》获首届“跨世纪”杯全国中学生作文大赛一等奖之后,今年张弢的作文《旧物》又获一等奖的殊荣。这两篇作文之所以获奖,既有偶然性,又有必然性。《失学少年》所写的人物和故事就发生在表姐家里,他耳熟能详的精彩细节比写出来的多得多;《旧物》则是他体验极深的一段经历。他是年仅13岁的初二学生,生活面较窄,巧妇难为无米之炊。如果不是碰巧有精彩的真人真事,他写其它的内容就会逊色得多。这就是偶然性。顺便提提另外一个偶然:我既是他的语文教师,也是他的亲生母亲。
Following last year’s “Out of School Youth” won the first prize of the first “Trans-Century” Cup National Middle School Student Essay Contest, Zhang Hao’s essay “Old Things” won another first-prize award this year. The reason why these two compositions were awarded was both accidental and inevitability. The characters and stories written by “Out of School Boys” happened in the cousin’s home, and the details of his familiar and detailed details were much more than those written; “Old Things” was an experience he experienced very deeply. He is a 13-year-old junior high school student. He has a narrow life. If it doesn’t happen to have wonderful real people, he will write much less. This is accidental. By the way, I mention another incident: I am both his language teacher and his biological mother.