[赏析]习作写得既生动又好看,充满了小学生的想象力和机智。故事并没有什么高大全的主题思想,勉强作分析的话也只能说,反映了小学生对当前学校教育过于刻板、规范的不满,他们向往更自由、更有趣的教育秩序和方法。但这确实是一个好听、好看的故事。虽是想象作文,却真实地表达了小学生的向往和追求。这就足够了。刚刚还是晴空万里,可是忽然间乌云密布,一道道闪电在天空中闪烁。“咔嚓”一声,整栋楼都淹没在黑暗之中。 [Appreciation] writing is both vivid and good-looking exercises, full of pupils imagination and tact. The story does not have any grand theme, and barely can be said to analyze. It shows that primary school students are too rigid and normative about current school education. They are more free and more interesting in educational order and method. But this is indeed a nice, good-looking story. Although it is imagination composition, but truly expressed the aspirations and pursuit of primary school students. that’s enough. Just still sunny sky, but suddenly cloudy, a flash of lightning flashed in the sky. “Kacha ” soon, the entire building are submerged in the darkness.