小编的话:你想知道老师是怎么改作文的吗?为什么老师会写这样的评语呢?每一期我们都会请来活跃在教学第一线的名师,为同学们改作文。看了他们的批改,大家一定会恍然大悟:咦,我也经常这么写啊!原来老师改我的文章时是这么想的啊!希望大家看了名师详尽到位的点评,能在写作文方面获得不小的启发! Xiaobian words: you want to know how to change the text of the teacher do? Why the teacher will write such a comment? Each period we will be invited to active in the teaching of the first line of teachers, for the students to change composition. Read their approval, we will suddenly realized: 咦, I often write ah! The original teacher changed my article is so thought ah! I hope you read the teacher in full details of the comments, in writing can be obtained without Little inspiration!