作文教学,我们常常从文出发,指导学生审题立意,构思布局。自觉不自觉地用文艺评论的标准,从文章学、写作学的角度去剖析学生作文,其结果是学生写出来的文章空话连篇,内容“似曾相识”,缺少生气。作文是学生的一种心智活动,应该回到教学原点,体现以人为本的原则,从生活出发,从写 In composition teaching, we often start from the point of view and guide the students to review the ideas, ideas and layout. Consciously unconsciously using the criteria of literary criticism, from the point of view of essay writing and writing to analyze student writings, the result is that the students write articles that are empty words, the content is “deja vu”, lack of anger. Essay is a kind of mental activity for students. It should return to the origin of teaching. It embodies the principle of people-oriented, starting from life and writing.