原段读一读天上,落下一滴一滴雨点儿,落在地上、小河里、树叶上、小窗上,“噼啪,噼啪”响个不停。我捧起一个脸盆,去接雨点儿,雨点儿落在脸盆里。我穿上一双小雨靴,打开一把小花伞,跑到门外,雨点儿打在小花伞上。我走来又走去,好开心哪!哈哈,雨点儿唱的歌真好听!魔法念一念雨点儿唱歌啦,小朋友们听到了吗?这段话写下雨的情景,可惜的是欠缺了一点儿“情趣”。情趣藏在哪儿呢?赶快请我们的小精灵“象声词”帮忙吧!有关描写下雨声 The original paragraph read the sky, drop a drop of rain, fell on the ground, small river, the leaves, the small window, “crackling, crackling” ring. I picked up a washbasin to meet the rain, rain drops in the basin. I put on a pair of rain boots, opened a small umbrella, ran outside, raindrop hit the small umbrella. Haha, the song that rains nice to hear! The magic recites the raindrops to sing, the children hear it? This passage writes the raining scene, what a pity is lacking a bit Children “fun ”. Where to hide the fun? Quickly please our elf “onomatopoeia ” Help! Describe the sound of rain