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辅导点拨:本文的作者能紧紧抓住人物的动作和语言来刻画人物形象,把“新妈妈”对“我”和蔼可亲的态度和无微不至的关怀真实地表现了出来。语言描写也很有特色,突出了“新妈妈”幽默风趣的个性。另外,作者还能适当描写人物的外貌、神态,让“新妈妈”给人以朴实、勤劳、干练的印象。其中“愣”“笑眯眯”“乐呵呵”的神态描写很传神。小作者描写细腻,语言朴实,字里行间都体现了“新妈妈”对自己浓浓的亲妈情,读来很感人。
Counseling Dialogue: The author of this article can seize the characters’ movements and language to portray character images and truly show his “new mommy” “amicable” attitude and meticulous care. Language description is also very distinctive, highlighting the “New Mom ” humorous personality. In addition, the author can also properly describe the appearance of the character, demeanor, so that “new mom” gives a simple, hard-working, capable impression. Which “stunned ” “smiling ” “music ” demeanor description is vivid. Small author describes the delicate, simple language, between the lines are reflected in “new mother ” to their own thick pro-mom, read very touching.