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在记叙文中,人物是文章的灵魂,但在考场作文中常见的人物形象往往是千人一面,既无个性,又不生动,整篇文章显得干瘪乏味,缺少感染力。那么,如何去刻画鲜活的人物形象呢?一、抓住待征,描写要精当【问题习作】我的妹妹从出生到现在只有四个月,白里透红的皮肤,一双炯炯有神的大眼睛,一只小巧的鼻子和一个像红樱桃那样小而红的嘴巴,这就是我的妹妹。妹妹高兴的时候就像打太极拳似的摇摆着自己的双臂,两条腿一下接一下地乱蹬。【诊断分析】由于作者观察不仔细,所以描写不精当,不具体,“笔墨空”而“影子淡”。当然未能突出
In the narrative, the characters are the soul of the essay, but the common characters in the essay essay are often thousands of people, neither personality nor vivid, the whole article appears dull and lack of contagious power. So, how to portray a vivid character image? First, seize the sign, to describe the fine [problem] My sister from birth to now only four months, the white skin rosy, a pair of piercing Big eyes, a petite nose and a small, red mouth like a red cherry, this is my sister. My sister is like a tai chi when swinging his arms like swinging, two legs and then chaos followed by a pedal. [Diagnostic Analysis] Because of the author’s observation is not careful, so the description of improper, not specific, “pen ink empty ” and “shadow light ”. Of course, failed to highlight