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【教材原题】从你近期的作文中选出一篇,认真读一读,自己先看看存在哪些问题。然后4或5人分成一个小组,讨论一下该如何进行修改,确定修改思路。【写作导引】常听到这样一句话:“好作文是改出来的。”诚哉斯言!相传唐宋八大家之一的王安石在写“春风又绿江南岸”一句时,一个“绿”字反复推敲,反复修改,先后从“到”“吹”“过”“来”“驻”等等一直改到“绿”字方止,于是才有了这流传至今的千古名句。我国文学巨匠鲁迅先生的散文《藤野先生》全文不足4000字,改
[Original textbook] From your recent essay selected one, read carefully, first look at what problems exist. Then 4 or 5 people divided into a group to discuss how to make changes to determine the revised ideas. [Writing Guidance] often hear such a sentence: “Good essay is changed out. ” Kaori Si words! Legend has it that Wang Anshi, one of the eight Tang and Song dynasties in writing , A “green” word repeated scrutiny, repeated changes, successively from “to ” “blow ” “over ” “to ” “resident ”The word only stop, so have this ancient essay circulating so far. Mr. Lu Xun’s essay “Mr. Fujino”, the great master of Chinese literature, has less than 4,000 words in total