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辅导点拨作者抓住“喜欢”这一题眼,层次清晰地描写了人们欢度佳节的不同方式,突出了亲情与和谐两大主题。全文布局合理,详略得当,条理清晰,语言生动,中心突出,首尾照应,结构完整。我最喜欢的节日是中秋节。中秋节是我国的传统佳节,与春节、端午、清明并称为中国的四大传统节日。它起源于唐朝时期,那时,人们过节主要是赏月。到了清朝时期,成为“民俗大节”。我喜欢中秋节。中秋节的月亮那么亮,那么美。月亮时而像一位害羞的少女,风哥
Guidance points to seize the author “like ” this eye, the level clearly describes the different ways people celebrate the festive season, highlighting the two major themes of affection and harmony. Full-text layout is reasonable, detailed and appropriate, clear and organized, vivid language, center prominent, first and last response, structural integrity. My favorite festival is Mid-Autumn Festival. Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional festival of our country, and the Spring Festival, Dragon Boat Festival, Ching Ming and known as China’s four traditional festivals. It originated in the Tang Dynasty, when people were mainly on the holiday of the moon. In the Qing Dynasty, became “Folk Festival ”. I like the Mid-Autumn Festival. Mid-Autumn Festival moon so bright, so beautiful. The moon sometimes looks like a shy young girl, the wind brother