这是一首曲折动人的爱心颂歌。作者运用第一人称的写法,讲述了“我”的外婆帮助一个穷苦少年以及七年后这个少年回来报恩的故事。写作上有一些地方值得我们学习。就事情的发生而言,外婆助人在前,汇款报恩在后。但是,作者没有按照这个顺序写,却选择一张30万元的巨额汇款单作为切入点。从不明来历的汇款单,到寻找汇款人,再到汇款的原因(从而带出外婆帮助黄海滨的事),最后交代汇款的去向。悬念迭起,层层推进,曲折紧凑,引人入胜。 This is a song of touching love carols. The author uses first-person wording to tell the story of a grandmother who helps me to help a poor boy and a boy who returns after seven years. There are some places in writing that deserve our study. As far as things go, grandmother helps others in the front and remits money later. However, the author did not write in this order, but chose a 300,000 yuan huge remittance as a starting point. From the unidentified remittance slip, to finding the remitter and then to the remittance reason (thus bringing out the grandmother's help to Huang Haibin), and finally explain the whereabouts of the remittance. Suspense one after another, advancing layers, winding and compact, fascinating.