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失误原因:详略不当题目:入门一考生随着古装大剧《甄嬛传》的热播,剧中插曲《姑苏行》也是出尽风头。婉转悠扬的笛声在天地间回响,唯美得让人沉醉。竹笛,是我国最古老的乐器之一,具有强烈的民族特色,古人称其声为荡涤之声。①这一段插入不自然,与上下文也不太协调。我央求妈妈给我报了笛子班。看着优雅的琴室,我暗自庆幸这次选择的正确。排队领取属于自己的小小竹笛后,我迫不及待地想开始练习。谁知乐器
Reason for the error: a detailed inappropriate topic: a test entry with the costume drama “Zhen Huan Biography” hit, the episode “Gusu line” is also the limelight. Euphemistically melodious whistle echoed in the world, the aesthetics was so intoxicated. Bamboo flute, is one of the oldest musical instruments in our country, with a strong national characteristics, the ancients called their voices for the cleanliness. ① This section of the insertion is not natural, and the context is not too coordinated. I begged my mother to give me a flute class. Looking at the elegant piano room, I secretly glad that this choice is correct. After lining up to receive my own little bamboo flute, I can not wait to start practicing. Who knows the instrument