同学们修改作文的时候,常常会发现一些细节与要突出的人物、事件、景物等无关,成了多余、无用的“死”细节,白白地占了大量篇幅。但这些“死”细节,只要写的是人物、事件或景物的真实情况,不一定要一一删除,大多数还是可以改“活”的。怎样把“死”细节改“活”呢?一、否定改“活”。如在《第一次学采茶》的习作里,小作者写了这样一个细节: When students modify their essay, they often find that some details are irrelevant to prominent figures, events, scenes, etc., and they become superfluous and useless “dead ” details, which occupy a lot of space in vain. However, these “dead ” details, as long as the write is the real situation of people, events or scenery, do not have to delete one by one, most can still change “living ”. How to change the details of “death” “living ”? First, the negative change “living ”. As in the “learn the first tea” in the operation, the author wrote such a detail: