一、教师批改,做好引领学生把习作交上来教师查阅后,选择有代表性的习作(中等生为主),在教师的指导下,共同讨论,集体修改。怎样修改呢?出示学生习作,然后用红笔修改给孩子看 First, teachers make corrections, do a good job to lead students to pay for the operation of the teacher review, choose a representative of the work (mainly secondary students), under the guidance of the teachers, to discuss and collective changes. How to modify it? Show students practice, and then use the red pen to modify to the children