绝大多数语文教师认为“作文教学存在教师难教、学生难写”的现状,每次学生习作内容几乎千篇一律,缺乏真实,缺少新颖感。语言文字硬巴巴的,枯燥无味,无一点真情实感,甚至通篇口语化,犹如两个老太婆在闲聊。我认为,其根本原因在于我们现行的封闭的课堂离开了学生的切身生活。作文时,有些 Most of the language teachers think that “writing teaching there is difficult to teach teachers, students difficult to write,” the status quo, each student writing almost stereotyped, the lack of real, the lack of novelty. Language hard and stiff, boring, without any real feeling, and even colloquial colloquialism, as if two old woman chatting. In my opinion, the fundamental reason is that our current closed classroom has left the vital part of the students. When writing, some