××同志:来信和来稿都收到了。你让我们给你看看稿子,提点意见,帮助改改,达到见报水平。说实在话,你这篇稿子是比较难改的,即使我们能在文字上帮你润色一下,使它通顺、简洁一些,也于内容无补,没法见报。要解决这个问题,还得从根本上做起:努力学习,提高思想和写作能力,而不是急急忙忙要求发表。就以你写的这篇新闻来说吧。 Comrade XX: Letters and contributions have been received. You let us give you a look at the manuscript, put forward some comments, help change, to achieve the level of Praise. To be honest, your manuscript is more difficult to change, even if we can help you polish your text, make it fluent, concise, but also in the content of no help, can not see the newspaper. To solve this problem, we must start from the root: to study hard and improve our thinking and writing skills, rather than hurry to ask for publication. Just for the news you wrote.