翻开1983年《优秀新闻稿选》第五页,上面有这样一段描写: “凶犯狗急跳墙,对准陈祥定右眼角就是狠狠地一拳,打得陈祥定眼睛直痛,但陈祥定紧紧扭住凶犯不放。……”这段描写中用“直痛”来描述陈祥定的眼睛被凶犯打的程度,是不恰当的。因为“直痛”究竟是什么样子,谁也形容不出来。听众没有这样的感受,不如把原句改成“打得陈祥定眼 Opened 1983, “Outstanding Press Release election,” the fifth page, there is such a description above: “The perpetrators jumped into the wall, aimed at Chen Xiangding right corner is fiercely punched, played Chen Xiang eyes straight pain, but Chen Xiangding tightly twist the murderer Do not let go .... ”This depiction of“ straight pain ”to describe the extent of Chen Xiangding’s eyes were attacked by criminals, is not appropriate. Because “straight pain” exactly what it looks like, no one can tell. Audiences do not have such a feeling, it is better to change the original sentence "played Chen Xiang fixed eyes