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写好作文的根本条件是什么?要有美好的心灵。为什么这样说呢?来看几个例子(均见贵州教育出版社2001年出版的《春芽绿》一书):第一个例子是余琴同学的《温暖》,写她家搬新居,作者收拾房间的东西,母亲说把不要的全扔掉,那双破成个大嘴巴的红色保暖鞋被母亲扔掉后作者却悄悄捡回来塞进箱里。她为什么这样作?当初没这双鞋时,冬天放学回家母亲用热水给她暖和冻僵的脚;后来母亲特地进趟城,
What are the basic conditions for writing good compositions? Have a good heart. Why do you say this? Let’s look at a few examples (see the “Spring Bud Green” book published by Guizhou Education Press in 2001): The first example is Yu Qin’s “Warmness”, written by her family and moved to a new house. After cleaning up things in the room, the mother said she had thrown away all the unwanted ones. The pair of red warm shoes that had been broken into big mouths had been thrown away by her mother and the author quietly picked them up and stuffed them into the box. Why did she do this? When she didn’t have the shoes, she went home from school in the winter to give her warm and frozen feet with hot water; later her mother entered the city specifically.