这是现代著名诗人冰心的一首新诗。鄂教版教材选入这首诗歌时,课本上对这首诗有四处批注。这样一来,学生可以通过课本上批注的示范学会圈点批注的方法,同时也可以结合批注增强对这首含蓄隽永的新诗的理解。因此,在上这节课时,我让学生先学习教材中的批注方式,然后基于自己的阅读体验选择一处最喜欢的地方再做一项批注。完成这一工作之后,我的授课便正式开始了。我问学生:“对于这首诗,有哪些能够引起你们感情共鸣的地方,能否跟大家分享一下?” This is a modern poem Bing Xin’s a new poem. Ewenki textbook selected this poem, textbooks on the poem there are four comments. In this way, students can learn how to punctuate and annotate textbooks, and at the same time, they can enhance the understanding of this new and meaningful essay. So at the time of this class, I asked the students to learn how to comment in the textbook and choose a favorite place based on their own reading experience to make a comment. After completing this work, my class has officially started. I ask the students: “For this poem, what can cause your feelings resonate, can we share with you?”