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一、导入同学们,今天咱们要上一节写作讲评课。讲评的作文是上学期期末考的考场作文,题目是“一件新鲜事”和“我真的长大了”。我在寒假里认真地、反复地阅读了大家写的36篇作文,其中,有很多文章写得相当不错,朴实、流畅、幽默。此外,老师还发现大家的文章全都是叙事性的。有照顾生病的妈妈、做沙包、学游泳、走夜路、坐海盗船、母女冲突、和难题作战、看四只小猫爬竹子等等。你看,这些事件多么真实而有个性。更
First, the introduction of classmates, today we have to write a comment on the class. The essay is a composition of the exams for the final semester of the exam, entitled “A New Thing” and “I Really Grow Up.” During the winter vacation, I read carefully and repeatedly the 36 essays we wrote. Among them, many articles are well written, simple, fluent and humorous. In addition, the teacher also found that everyone’s articles are all narrative. To take care of sick mother, do sandbags, learn to swim, go the night, take a pirate ship, mother and daughter conflict, and the challenges of fighting to see four kittens climbing bamboo and so on. Look, how real and personal these events are. more