【病文入院】我的个性好友江西省瑞昌市桂林中心小学侯范文(题目就很吸引人,好的题目能吸引读者的眼球)看!一头乌黑发亮的头发,一对炯炯有神的大眼睛,一张颇为帅气的面孔,一张能说会道的巧嘴,(外貌描写要能体现人物性格,不必泛泛地描写)加上他邋遢的独特性格,就成了在班上小有名气的一个人——邓梓桢。他的邋遢(邋遢是肮脏、不整洁的意思。而看了你所写的事情,却是写他大意健忘的性格特 [Admitted to the hospital] My personality Buddy Rui Chang City, Jiangxi Province, Gui Lin Central Primary School Hou Fan (title is very attractive, good topic can attract the reader’s eye) look! A shiny black hair, a pair of piercing Big eyes, a rather handsome face, a clever clenched mouth, (description of the character to reflect the character of the person, without having to describe it in a broad sense), coupled with his shameful personality, has become less famous in the class A person - Deng Zizhen. His 邋 遢 (邋 遢 is dirty, untidy meaning, and read what you write, but it is written his unforgettable personality 特特