此作有一定的草书功力。单从作品上看,还存在某些技术的欠缺,如“花”与“规”、“闻”与“郎”,草书表现不够规范。“龙、寄”的写法则有误,建议上述字的写法参照“草书字典”或各家古帖中的写法。写法表现欠缺,在学练上,平时要多练字少创作,而且注重练古代名帖。 This has a certain cursive skill. From the work point of view, there are still some lack of technology, such as “flowers” and “rules”, “smell” and “Lang” cursive performance is not standardized. “Dragon, send,” the writing is wrong, it is recommended that the wording of the above-mentioned reference to “cursive dictionary” or the ancient writing in the wording. Wording lack of performance, in practice, usually less creative writing, and pay attention to practicing the ancient name card.