作文,引路固然重要,但作文后的批阅讲解更不可忽视,它可让孩子们再次感动。而感动是一扇窗,有窗子阳光就会进来,有阳光就会有温暖。今年的母亲节过后,我让孩子们以“母亲节”为话题作文。作文批阅中见到这样的一篇,下面是节选:母亲节这一天,我在家里苦思冥想:“送母亲什么礼物呢?”左思右想不得其解。母亲三年前就走了,这三年间我没见过她一次。她只甩给我一个陌生的电话号码。(说实话,我恨她,恨她的背弃!)“哎!那就给她打个电话吧!”我拨通了那个不太喜欢的号码。听见她衰老的 Essay, lead the way is important, but after the essay to read and explain can not be ignored, it allows children to move again. The move is a window, the sun will come in the window, there will be warm sunshine. After this year’s Mother’s Day, I asked the children to write “Mother’s Day.” The following is an excerpt from the essay review: On Mother’s Day, I think hard at home: “What gift does my mother send?” My mother left three years ago. I have not seen her once in these three years. She just left me a strange phone number. (To tell you the truth, I hate her, hate her forgo!) “Hey! Then give her a call!” "I dialed the not-so-favorite number. Hear her aging