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小学生初涉写作,缺乏技巧和经验;年龄小,阅历不足,写作中没有足够鲜活的素材加以发挥,导致“流水账”作文是一种必然。一、教学中呈现的“流水账”作文现象苏教版小学语文六年级上册习作1的具体写作要求是:“请你选择假期中感受最深的一段生活经历,写一篇作文,题目自定。”这篇作文交上来以后,水平可谓是参差不齐,但是可以发现一个很普遍的现象——许多学生将假期生活写成了流水账。比如我班学生作文中出现的下面这个作文
Primary school students involved in writing, lack of skills and experience; young, lack of experience, writing is not enough fresh material to be played, resulting in “running account ” composition is an inevitable. First, the teaching presented in the “running account ” essay phenomenon Sujiao version of the sixth grade of the primary school language on the book a specific writing requirements are: "Please choose a holiday experience the deepest part of life experience, writing an essay, the subject from When the essay comes in, the level is very uneven, but a common phenomenon can be found - many students write off the holiday life as a running account. For example, the following essay appeared in my class composition