沈君,中学高级教师,松江区学科名师。曾多次承担市区级的研讨课和示范课,撰写的教育教学论文各获市一等奖及其他奖,并在市、区级刊物上发表。擅长作文教学,注重让学生大量阅读,厚积薄发,经常采用赏析班级佳作等方式提高学生的习作兴趣。曾辅导许多学生获全国、市、区等第奖。(一)我坐在火车上,妈妈也坐在火车上。我们向南,去江苏,爸爸的老家。我去上学,是一所新学校。望着窗外,我有些茫然,只有几棵孤零零的小树立在路基边。火车出站了。车窗前,有一棵美丽的小树,绿绿的叶子,白色的小花……接着,一棵棵小树在车窗前,由慢到快,由走到跑,由跑到闪……闪 Shen Jun, middle school senior teacher, Songjiang District discipline teacher. Has repeatedly assumed the city-level seminars and demonstration classes, writing education and teaching papers each won the first prize and other awards, and municipal and district publications. Good at composition teaching, focusing on allowing students to read a lot, accumulate, often used to appreciate class masterpieces and other ways to enhance students’ interest in learning. Many students have been counseled by the country, city, district and other awards. (A) I sat on the train, my mother sat on the train. We south, to Jiangsu, father’s home. I go to school, is a new school. Looking out the window, I am a little dazed, only a few solitary trees set up in the subgrade. The train is out. In front of the window, there is a beautiful little tree, green leaves, white flowers ... ... Then, a small tree in front of the window, from slow to fast, from run to run by the flash ... ... flash