习作是极富个性的精神产品,追求“用自己的话,写自己的生活,写自己的体验”。对于小学生来说,就是用儿童天真、稚拙、自然的语言,写出童心、童趣、童幻,使内在真实的感情与外在自然的语言表达相一致。但应试教育影响下的写作,纯粹是为了得到一个好的成绩,学生的自我体验和个性语言严重缺失,学生的写作兴趣也在丧失。因此,还习作以生命的本原乃当务之急。 Practice is a very personal spiritual product, the pursuit of “in your own words, write your own life, write your own experience.” For pupils, it is to use innocence, naive and natural language of children to write innocence, playfulness and children’s illusion so as to make the inner real feelings consistent with the external natural language expressions. However, under the influence of examination-oriented education, writing is purely to get a good result. Students ’self-experience and personality language are seriously lacking, and students’ interest in writing is also lost. Therefore, it is imperative to practice the principle of life.