技法一点通写景的文章往往都是借助对景物的描写来抒发情感,李一同学的这篇文章重在写春天景物的变化,进而突出对春天的赞美与热爱。但对主体内容丁香花描述不够具体、生动。只有注入丁香花竞相开放的场面,春的气息才算流露充分! The technique of writing a scene with a bit of scenery is often based on the depiction of scenery to express their emotions. This article by a student of LI LI focuses on the changes of spring scenery, which in turn highlights the praise and love for spring. However, the description of the main content of clove is not specific and vivid. Only into lush flowers competing to open the scene, the spring breath is considered fully exposed!