人物语言一个调是中学生作文中常见毛病之一。比如,写老师,写家长——父亲、母亲,祖父、祖母往往是:“你不努力学习,怎能参加中考？又怎能考上大学呀?”“你要争口气呀,看人家小二子”……这样,写出来的人物语言,显示不出人物的身份、年龄、性别,也就是显示不出人物的个性,丝毫不能感人。 The tone of the character language is one of the common problems in the composition of middle school students. For example, writing teachers and writing parents—fathers, mothers, grandfathers, and grandmothers are often: “If you don’t study hard, how can you participate in the exam? How can you get into college?” “You have to fight for a breath, look at other people. “... In this way, the character language that is written out cannot show the person’s identity, age, or gender, that is, the character’s personality cannot be displayed. It does not touch anyone at all.”