点评这是一个十分真实的励志故事。小作者以细致入微的动作和心理描写勾勒出一个内心深处被压抑着的但却蓬勃向上的青涩少年。小作者对作文执着的爱让她如病如醉,难以自拔,那不是仅存在于空想的乌托邦,那是她用汗水一点一滴搭建起来的希望城堡。在追逐梦想的途中,克制中的信念往往更加坚定,每一次努力 Comments This is a very real inspirational story. Small author with meticulous action and psychological description sketched out a deep but depressed but vigorous young adolescent. The small author’s devoted love makes her sick and hard to extricate itself. That is not the utopia that exists only in the imagination. It is the castle of hope she builds up bit by bit with sweat. On the way to chasing your dreams, the faith in restraint tends to be more determined and hardworking every time