购买彩票事,一波三折。首段有重大作用——同末段照应,升华“抗拒诱惑”主旨。第二自然段中“买一张彩票只要两元钱,即使不中奖,也可以为中国福利事业做点贡献”一语,应该删除,“随意”一词应该改为“刻意”,标题中的“中奖”应该加双引号。卒句议论是大路货的写法,要将其意寓于记叙中。 Lottery ticket purchases. The first paragraph has a major role - the same as the last paragraph, sublimation “resistance temptation” subject. In the second paragraph, the phrase “Buy a lottery ticket as long as two yuan, even if it does not win, can also contribute to the cause of China’s welfare,” the phrase should be deleted, “free” should be replaced by “intentional”, in the title “Winning” should be double quotation marks. The argument of pawning is the writing of Daluo, and its meaning is to be included in the narrative.