同学们都知道动作描写很重要,可就是写起来很笼统,不具体,更谈不上生动了。这不,作文课上,马小跳正为这事烦着哩。秦老师让大家写一件事,一定要有动作描写。马小跳苦思冥想了半天,好不容易才挤出了几句——放学了,我跑回了家,放下书包,倒了一杯水,猛地喝了一大口。然后,我拿出书和作业本,开始写作业。秦老师一看,轻轻摇了摇头。见老师摇头,马小跳知道自己写得不好,可又不 Students all know that action description is very important, but it is very general, not specific, let alone lively. This is not, essay class, Ma Xiaotiao is in trouble for miles. Qin teacher let everyone write one thing, there must be action description. Ma Xiaojuan thinking hard for a long time, finally squeezed out a few words - after school, I ran home, put down the bag, poured a glass of water, suddenly drank a big mouth. Then, I took out the book and homework and started homework. Qin teacher saw, gently shook his head. See the teacher shook his head, Ma Xiaojiao know he is not well written, but not