“退一步”入题——从“泼辣狠毒”的王熙凤身上找“不经意间播下的”善行及其收获——用例很独特,且符合辩证法“人性是复杂的”。“退一步”能更进一步地表明题旨——“不经意间播下的善良,尚能收获如此大的希望,更何况我们真诚地播种呢”。此文还需要升格:王熙凤“不经意间播下的”善行和“巧姐有了一个相对较好的命运归宿”,还要展开写;而首段可略。 “Step back” into the topic - from the “spirited and poisonous” Wang Xifeng to the “inadvertently sowed” good deeds and their harvest - the use case is unique, and in line with dialectics “human nature is complex.” “Stepping back” can further illustrate the theme - “Inadvertently sowed good, still able to harvest such a great hope, let alone we sincerely sown it.” This article also needs upgrading: Wang Xifeng’s “inadvertently sowed” good deeds and “Qiao Qiao had a relatively good destiny fate”, but also to write; and the first paragraph can be omitted.