编者推荐:文章用了九个排比段,但不是‘大路文章’,因为它们总合在‘对手是自己’的主旨中。发现‘贪玩’和‘骄傲自满’是对手,需要思维的深刻性——这是辩证思考的结果。‘暴躁’这一对手,应改为‘笨嘴拙舌’。倒数第二自然段的‘死离’宜改为‘别离’。 Editor’s recommendation: The article uses nine rows of paragraphs, but it is not a ‘big road article’ because they are all combined in the main theme of ’the opponent is himself’. The discovery of ‘funny’ and ‘proud complacency’ is an opponent and requires a deeper thinking – this is the result of dialectical thinking. The tyrant’s rival should be changed to ‘stupid and swearing.’ The ‘death’ in the penultimate paragraph should be changed to ‘divorce’.