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先写标题中的“走”——“顺着一条小路……”;再写“进”——“出洞,进了桃花源”;最后写“桃花源”——“来到‘秦人村’”。思路清晰,脉络分明。此文还需要升格:重点写秦人村,定向选择材料,所议要切中所述之肯綮。
Write the heading “go” --“ along a path...”; write “in”“” out of the hole, into the Peach Blossom Source“; finally write ”Peach Blossom Source“ ——”Come to Qinren Village". The thinking is clear and the context is clear. This article also needs upgrading: Focus on writing Qin village, targeted selection of materials, the proposed agreement to cut in the Ken.