【评介】这是—首写景诗。作者以简洁的笔墨勾画出雨后特有的图景。看,雨过天睛,碧空蓝天,远山苍苍,花红似火,草绿如茵,小溪潺潺,多么令人陶醉!作者以白描、拟人手法,把幼儿日常生活中常见的景物:天、山、花、草、小河予以集中组合,涂以绚丽的色彩,从而使幼儿感受到大自然的美。最后作者由衷地叹道:“啊,雨,停了……”写得看似平直,但仔细品味,情意却颇深长。因为这样既流露 [Comment] This is - the first King poem. The author sketches the peculiar picture after the rain with simple ink and brush. Look, the rain had its eyes open, blue sky, mountains and mountains, red flowers, green grass, gurgling streams, how intoxicating! Writer with white sketching, anthropomorphic techniques, the daily life of children common scenery: , Flowers, grass, small river to be a combination, painted with brilliant colors, so that children feel the beauty of nature. Finally, the author solemnly sighed: “ah, rain, stopped ... ...” It seems straight, but carefully savored, the feeling is quite deep. Because it is both exposed