论文部分内容阅读
请根据下面提示，写一篇约100字左右的短文。
最近，你班同学参加了某英语报社组织的一次讨论。讨论的主题是：中学生应不应该上网。有人支持，有人反对。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况并发表你自己的看法。
赞同上网
上网可以查询资料
上网可以提高成绩，尤其是英语
上网可以结识朋友
不赞同上网
上网玩游戏浪费时间和金钱
有害的垃圾内容太多
容易上瘾
应该取缔网吧
注意：
1、信的开头已经为你写好
2、词数：100左右
3、参考词汇：网吧－cyber cafe
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether the middle school students should be allowed to go to the cyber cafe.
Yours truly，
Li Ming
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether the middle school students should be allowed to go to the cyber cafe.
Some students think it is good for us. We can find information through the Internet. It can help us to improve our studies, especially our English. We can play computer games, and of course we can make good friends.
But other students say going to the cyber cafewill waste our time and money. There is too much harmful information. We can easily form the bad habit of going to the cyber cafeoften. The cyber cafes should be closed.
I think the Internet is a window to the outside world. It is good if we can make good use of it. But the government must take measures to make sure that it is safe enough and there are no harmful things.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
评析
这篇书面表达要求就“中学生该不该上网”发表看法。短文应该至少包括三个方面的内容：一是支持者的看法，二是反对者的意见，三是作者自己对这个问题的看法。考生在书写该文时，基本上写清了要求的要点，没有遗漏。语言比较通顺流畅，无明显的语法错误。特别是最后在表达自己的观点时非常清楚明确，是一篇相当不错的书面表达。（指导老师 徐永）
最近，你班同学参加了某英语报社组织的一次讨论。讨论的主题是：中学生应不应该上网。有人支持，有人反对。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况并发表你自己的看法。
赞同上网
上网可以查询资料
上网可以提高成绩，尤其是英语
上网可以结识朋友
不赞同上网
上网玩游戏浪费时间和金钱
有害的垃圾内容太多
容易上瘾
应该取缔网吧
注意：
1、信的开头已经为你写好
2、词数：100左右
3、参考词汇：网吧－cyber cafe
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether the middle school students should be allowed to go to the cyber cafe.
Yours truly，
Li Ming
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether the middle school students should be allowed to go to the cyber cafe.
Some students think it is good for us. We can find information through the Internet. It can help us to improve our studies, especially our English. We can play computer games, and of course we can make good friends.
But other students say going to the cyber cafewill waste our time and money. There is too much harmful information. We can easily form the bad habit of going to the cyber cafeoften. The cyber cafes should be closed.
I think the Internet is a window to the outside world. It is good if we can make good use of it. But the government must take measures to make sure that it is safe enough and there are no harmful things.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
评析
这篇书面表达要求就“中学生该不该上网”发表看法。短文应该至少包括三个方面的内容：一是支持者的看法，二是反对者的意见，三是作者自己对这个问题的看法。考生在书写该文时，基本上写清了要求的要点，没有遗漏。语言比较通顺流畅，无明显的语法错误。特别是最后在表达自己的观点时非常清楚明确，是一篇相当不错的书面表达。（指导老师 徐永）